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Writing Sample - Persuasive Speech

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I like the way I spoke clearly to my audience so they could understand. I also like the way I took my time so it didn't sound rushed. My next goal is to use some body language to engage my audience so I look more interesting to listen to and I have more confidence in me. 



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  1. Unknown28 May 2018 at 04:09

    Well written Breanna and very confident piece of writing

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  2. Anonymous15 June 2018 at 21:44

    Breanna, you have understand the text type of persuasive writing. You are able to clearly organise your writing in to paragraphs. I love the way you've used language features to enhance your writing. Your next step is to look at use more complex punctuation. You were so brave in presenting your speech to us!

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